Hello, Angelica!

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month! I read this poem earlier this ear and loved it. I wanted to be sure to celebrate your anniversary with a review (or more if I am able - we'll see!) so I saved this to my April calendar and here we are. I hope you enjoy this celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting.



INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
I am a total cat lover so your poem spoke to my heart. Well done!

You kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end. Great way to catch my attention, keep it, and make me want to read more of your poems in the future too. Well done!



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

My favorite line was the last: "And leave a paw on your heart." Sweet! They really do too. Well done!

Am I the only one who's sad that Rupali isn't here anymore? I'm guessing the invalid item was for her Express It in 40 Words or less challenge. I enjoyed doing that. I hope she's okay.

You made great use of your up to forty words with this poem that shows you love cats too. Well done!

I think I actually did the prompts for the first ten days of February for that challenge so this was one of my prompts. I wish the forum were still open so I could see what everyone write. I think I thought I'd read the rest after reviewing yours. Maybe she'll come back one day. Maybe I'll just search for cat poems.

Your poem also made me wonder - do you share your home with a cat now?

I didn't notice any spelling mistakes in your cute cat poem. Well done!






IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's purrfect as it is. Well done!


CONCLUSION:
You wrote a feline-themed poem that I enjoyed reading and that stood out enough for me to mark it for a future anniversary review. Well done!

Thank you for sharing your time, cat love, community spirit, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler











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