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Hi Beacon

My name is Lyn, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: Beacon's Info on Autism and Other Issues.

First Impression:

What needs your attention: Let's begin with this sentence because it's your opening and it needs to be compelling so the reader feels comfortable seeking more knowledge.

When my son was about 3 years of age, I got him checked out by Harbor Regional (in Torrance CA) because his development was slow and his speech stopped which I was very upset and they got him diagnosed.

My son was three years of age when I sought help at Harbor Regional. His development was slow and his speech stopped. I was very concerned about my son. Harbor Regional provided answers with his diagnosis Of Autism and ADHD.

Make every word count. Take each sentence and ditch a lot of the ands.

What part I liked best: I liked all the sources you found and have listed to help other parents sturggling with their child's development issues. Knowledge is power.

Overall impression: This was an informative read about a topic that is close to home. Our eldest grandson became no-verbial at age 3. His pediatrician initially diagnosed him as autistic. When my grandson began working with a speech therapist she questioned the diagnosis. She recommended my grandson get a second opinion which was a blessing because the cat scan showed my grandson had had a stroke. His treatment plan was changed and he is a happy teenager doing the same as his peers.

So yes, I understand the need for information and the value in second opinions.

The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise. Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.


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