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The Rose Open in new Window. [13+]
A single red rose changed their lives forever...
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Greetings,

I found this using the Random Read and Review button.

What a lovely flash fiction. I identify so much with that quiet, modest misfit lady. I won’t bore you with personal details, but it’s nice to see a character like that get a happy ending with someone who appreciates her. I don’t have anything to suggest about this perfect little vignette. (I guess vignette isn’t the right word; they use that to mean something without a beginning, middle and end, which this definitely has.)

You have such a knack for describing people and situations in vivid ways, whether it’s something lighthearted or darker. And you’ve used up just exactly 300 words, which makes it a “trabble” according to our Australian friend Steven. (Have you thought of trying his 100 word challenge? It’s incredibly fun and easy.)

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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