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On Crabapple Beach Open in new Window. [ASR]
My world = sand, beach, ocean, and scribbles
by Joy Author Icon
Review by StephBee Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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*Reading* THE POEM

Life's reflections and observations on Crabapple Beach.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I loved the personal tone of the poem. It invited the reader to take a peek at the poet's world.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a free form poem with no apparent rythme scheme.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "her first newscast to the world, with a sigh, as if saying, “I do,” -- Newscast here, implies a proclamation or an announcement, or even a commitment followed up with an "I do." There's a lot of emotion here, bubbling up and bursting out.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening invites the reader in as the poet walks down the beach and keeps them reading. The title is a nice fit for the poem. I enjoyed the inspiration the poet took from the beach. Nature has a way of stirring of the soul. That comes out in this poem.

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