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| (5.0)   HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"   Greetings, JustTurtle! I am reviewing this because it's your anniversary month. You've been here even longer than me! Happy 23!  First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest. The Positives/What I Liked I can definitely relate to this piece. I've leaned toward that way before, just wanting to quit all responsibility and be alone for a bit. It's probably not the best place to be, but oh, if we could only create our own little world in our own imagination...if only for a day, right???  And perhaps go there to revisit once a week, just to keep ourselves sane while dealing with reality! I think my favorite line is: Don't let the alarm of responsibility wake me, Wow. What a great line! I just want to put it on a poster and hang it on my bedroom wall! Excellent! Suggestions/Comments to ConsiderI wouldn't change a thing. Final ThoughtsNormally, I like free verse poetry free of punctuation, but this is not the case this time around. The punctuation works perfectly and if there were none, it would really take away from this piece. Well done! Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! Cubby ")
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