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| (5.0)  Hi, Dee! This was a beautiful nonet poem. I could feel the sorrow and pain the character has gone through. From mentioning the children, to the bruises on the person’s face, this is a truly powerful piece. Well done. ~~~ Your poem flowed effortlessly. Nonets, I feel, are often hard to write because they lack one syllable each time you start a new line. It can be hard to make this flow smoothly but you executed a beautiful rhythm here. ~~~ I have no suggestions for grammar/spelling. Everything was well done. You used no punctuation at the end of your lines but I feel this works well for this piece. Especially as the lines are offset, you already have that pause that a comma would add. You capitalized the first word only, but again, I think that works really well in this piece and within your style. ~~~ Overall, this was a dark, yet lovely poem. I enjoyed reading it. Your words held a lot of deep emotions which adds a lot to the piece. I’m sure many people can relate to this writing, and sharing experiences like these can help people feel normal and know that they are not alone. Wonderful job. Thank you for sharing!  A Review from: "Positive Hearts Reviews Group"   My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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