Hi Rick Fix ,I found your writing at your request and I am glad I did. Hopefully, this review will find you in good spirits.


On Title/Subject

Great and catchy title. It drew me in immediately.

General impressions

Wow, what a great poem. Very interesting wording, good atmosphere, and well written. I loved it.

Favorite Parts
It seems to have two parts, one about the vegetable avocado, or is it a fruit? I am never sure. The other is an encounter in the city.

I love a good ripe but not that ripe avocado. It is delicious and a very well-formed veggie. Never read a poem about it though, you are the first.

A wonderful poem that breathes city life. You are very good with words.

Suggestions
No errors I could find. No suggestions therefore, it is the best poem I read in a long time.

Because I am an ESL writer I had to look up a few words, loved that...I like to learn. You provided food for thought.

Final thoughts
Your choice of words, rhythm, and atmosphere makes me want to read more of your poems.

Keep up the good work, enjoy writing! Thanks for sharing.

WakeUpAndLive~NOV Word Monger



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