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Sir Bedivere Open in new Window. [13+]
Lancelot solves Sir Bedivere's problem.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Ah, the old problem - The knight rescues the Lady in Distress, but doesn't get the Standard Hero's Reward of welllll, um, Heroic Reward! Instead, he gets absolutely nothing. This, is annoying for him. Thus, he talks to a buddy, who tends to have better luck at getting the Heroic Reward. He soon gets some advice, and tries it out. Will it work? Read to learn.

Character
Characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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