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 Monday Open in new Window. [E]
A poem about Monday.
by amy-Finally writing a novel. Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello! I am associated with more than one review group, but am here today because of a prompt for "Space BlogOpen in new Window. and there is a review raid happening with "SuperPower Reviewers Choice RaidOpen in new Window.

I did not notice any spelling, grammatical, or punctuation errors. I always think adding a picture to an item helps draw the attention of a potential reader, and your title and description are good for this as well. Maybe, you could add a picture of a calendar with a Monday circled on it or something to that effect. I think a lot of readers can identify with this poem as a lot of them feel exactly this way about Mondays. Sometimes it's very hard to get out of bed when you are anticipating a chaotic day such as Monday and all the things that come with it. The item has some negativity but also points out some positive ideas as well.

Overall, I think this poem is put together well and expressed well. Great job! I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

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