This is my favourite poem I have read on here so far. You said words that felt like they were already existing in me. Like they were a thought I hadn't quite worked out how to articulate. I fact I uploaded a poem today, call "Sail to me upon an ocean I wept for you."
This verse hit hard:
"A ray of hope seemed to shine
through that amber potion in the glass,
but it was only the ruddy glow
from a neon sign."
Keep writing and I will keep reading!