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 Weekly Poetry Challenge Five Open in new Window. [13+]
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Greetings, sir!

I’m here as a fellow member of the PPC5 challenge.

Well, this was quaint and amusing, taking the form and giving it an original twist. I like the playful repetition of rhymes... It sounds almost like an old crooner's song at a pub in Vegas *Laugh*

My only suggestion is that according to the form requirements, there needs to be at least one rhyme with "moon." But it's ok to give it your own spin, as it's a rather complicated form to figure out... (Which reminds me I wanted to try Charles's Arabian poem challenge...)

I'm in a hurry today and honestly can't think of anything else to say... This was fun!

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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