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Blowin' In The Wind Open in new Window. [18+]
When a reporter jumps the gun, he gets more than he bargained for.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Greetings, Ed!

I bumbled across this in my sidebar some time ago. What a fun and well written story. I was dreading a dark twist or something of the sort… one never knows what to expect, you know? But yours was friendly and safe, and reminded me of the kind of thing I liked reading as a kid, Nancy Drew and Hardy Boys and such. The twists and turns were exciting, and it came to an end almost too quickly.

Perhaps a word count in the subtitle would be helpful so we know what we’re getting into. Also, Size 4 Verdana font is always a good idea, unless you want to try Courier bold in a larger size to tap into the spirit of news reporting while maintaining visibility.

You should also choose a third relevant genre for the item, to help more readers find and enjoy it. I would recommend News, Crime/Gangster, or Action/Adventure for this one.

And lastly, when you say “single handily” towards the beginning, the phrase is rather “single-handedly.” Not to be confused with “winning handily” or anything *Smile*

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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