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  Ontario Spring Open in new Window. [E]
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

THE WORD SEARCH

*Reading* A dirty little word search about spring in Canada.

*Smile* WHAT I LIKED

It reminded me of spring in New England. Blackflies. Good and bad memories. *Laugh*

*Star* ENGAGING

This was an easy to medium word search. I thought words like "buds" and "ants" would take me a while to find, but after a moderate glance, I found them pretty quick.

*Star*VARIETY

There's a nice of variety of words related to what spring is like in the more temperate climates.

*Star*MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

*Star*PARTING THOUGHTS

I might suggest using a graphic or a giphy in the introduction to set the tone for the word search. A fun puzzle that captures the essence of the season well. I highly recommend spending some time with it.

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