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 the river Open in new Window. [E]
A poem about water
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings, Apondia!

I'm here for I Write 2025.

This was a quaint and interesting poem, incorporating fun old songs which speak of rivers. I couldn't help remembering a few of my own favorite songs about rivers: The River, by Imagine Dragons; The River, by Jordan Feliz; River of Dreams, by Billy Joel; and Ghost, by Ella Henderson (written by my favorite guy Ryan Tedder...)

I would suggest using Size 4 Verdana font for your work; it's easier on the eyes and makes our items stand out on the page for a more engaging read. I also wonder why "the river" is underlined; most times italics would be fine for emphasis, but that's only if you need to highlight a given phrase for a contest or project.

I really appreciate your theme of observing how rivers inspire us to create songs and enjoy life. This was a fun read.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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