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The River Of Life Open in new Window. [ASR]
A river of life shapes a jagged rock into a pebble, resisting sin’s lure to find grace.
by Noisy Wren Author Icon
Review of The River Of Life  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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*Tulipo* Greetings, Noisy Wren! I am reviewing this because I discovered it on Read & Review and I'm so glad I did! *Smile*

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*Tulipp* The Positives/What I Liked

         *Bulletv* I absolutely loved this poetic pose. The flow, the freedom from structure, the rhymes that are not forced nor uniformed...all contribute to making this such a beautiful journey through The River of Life from a jagged rock to a polished pebble. I enjoyed this so much, I am still in awe of it.
         *Bulletg* I loved the beginning of this journey...Each bank holds seductive temptations, both false and free, boasting sweet slivers of sin on the edges to contaminate me.
         *Bulletp* I also loved...I'm a jagged rock, tumbling through, cracked, chipped, fractured, renewed.
         *Bulletb* And of course, the last line is perfection.


*Tulipb* Suggestions/Comments to Consider

I have nothing to suggest for improvement.

*Tulipy* Final Thoughts

         Thank you for sharing this beautiful poetic prose. You've created a splendid piece, indeed.

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