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broccoli Open in new Window. [ASR]
broccoli - An acrostic with as much enthusiasm as displayed for the vegetable itself!
by THANKFUL SONALI Magical Days! Author Icon
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hello THANKFUL SONALI Magical Days! Author Icon

My First Impression:
I enjoyed reading your poem.

My Favorite Part:

While I now enjoy broccoli as an adult. I wasn't a big fan of it as a kid. I like the way you made an acrostic poem out of the title and subject.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:

No suggestions that I could see. Have you tried a broccoli/cheddar soup? Also, cut the broccoli into small manageable bites. Maybe use some bacon w/ a bit of the fat to help flavor it. No harm, no foul if you cannot eat it still. Thank you for sharing.

*PenO* Write On!!*PenR*


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