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WIND Open in new Window. [E]
Compound Word Verse
by Monty Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Excellent, Monty. Pithy. So much loss, strongly felt. Brings back memories of living in the Oklahoma Panhandle and the fear I felt when a tornado warning was sounded. "A tornado has touched the ground!"

Consistent structure of tercet verses, flowing rhythm, and a-a-x rhyme scheme. The last line of each tercet "tips the hat" to the title.

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