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Pocket Size Stories Open in new Window. [E]
Dozens of memorable moments, each exactly 100 words (plus a "trilogy")
by Amethyst Autumn Angel Author Icon
         Review for entry/chapter: "Freedom" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Amethyst Autumn Angel Author Icon

I came across your flash fiction story looking at the different entries in "The Beatles Musical Extravaganza" Open in new Window..

I really liked the way you have utilised the prompt for your micro fiction story, I thought it was an imaginative response.

It is hard to get much across in 100 words and whilst there could be a lot more to this story, we learn that the main character is a prisoner obviously craving freedom, and the bird is a fitting metaphor for that freedom that she does not have.

I thought your description was very effective and I could picture the scene. *Smile* Great flash fiction entry .

*Bird*

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