Hi, WriterRick ,

I found your coming-of-age short story while browsing through the Read and Review section.

A great, well-written story about two youngsters escaping from their mundane town and searching for adventure. It seems to me that this is the start of many teenagers who want to travel and see the world, experiencing things.

Although the theme and development of the story are exciting, there are a lot of cliches in the story as well. But, as cliches go, they are often true. I didn't mind a bit.

For example, the description of the two main characters and their dialogue when trying to consider leaving.

But you managed to write a strong, fast-paced, and clear story, with a good flow and atmosphere, taking the reader by the hand in this process of escape and travel.

Although no real surprises, it was a good reading experience.

Thank you for sharing. Keep on writing and expanding your oeuvre.

WakeUpAndLive

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