Hi, GreenLion93 ,

I found your short story (almost prose poem?) in the Read and Review section.

But first of all, since you are still a newbie in your first year at WdC, Welcome!

I really, really liked this story. It has a soft demeanor about it that I loved, and the description of coffee making filled my nostrils with the excellent scent of freshly brewed coffee. I am a true coffee addict. So, you had me hooked from the start.

I read it almost like a prose poem, a quality I loved. Perhaps what drove me to think this was also your lack of paragraphing. At first, I thought this diminished the experience of reading your work, but after carefully reading it a second time, I found it's also its strength.

Words that come to mind are soft-spoken, lovable, dreamy, and very well written. A lovely moment frozen in time. It turned out to be a mirage, but who cares? The experience was there, the feelings were real, I loved it.

So, no errors, nothing that makes this wonderful reading experience go away. The atmosphere, the pace, and the descriptions linger on.

Thank you for sharing, and keep on writing.

WakeUpAndLive

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .