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THE LOST SOULS OF EIBERGEN Open in new Window. [13+]
A chance discovery evokes an indelible first-hand perspective of history's atrocities
by DRSmith Author Icon
Review by Marvelous Friend Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hello, I enjoyed reading your story item today. I am associated with "Space BlogOpen in new Window. and "WdC SuperPower Reviewers GroupOpen in new Window.. I wanted to give you a review because I really like your story.

It is so sad that any group of people were ever treated in such a fashion as the Jews were during the holocaust. Unfortunately, it happens all too often in our world.

While your picture for the item is appropriate and helps draw in your potential reader's attention, it was the title and description that grabbed my attention. I was looking through the cultural genre when I came across your item. Who doesn't like a story of a chance discovery leading to a first-hand connection to history, even if it happens to be the darker side of it?

Your story captivated me from start to finish. You started out with the experience of buying something from an auction and the anticipation and emotion associated with it. It wasn't just the experience of the purchase but walking your reader through the discovery and reaction to it. I appreciated the historical facts shared here too. I felt like I was a part of the story as I was watching it unfold. I could feel the passion of why WWII was necessary. I could relate while hearing about the photographs and the stories of the people in them. The story feels complete and does not leave your reader hanging.

I agree that the hideout story near the church was the one that stood out to me too even though I don't know all the details. These details were enough. I don't think I really want to hear any more.

I did not notice any spelling, grammar, or punctuation errors. I can't think of anything that would improve this writing. I feel like it is complete just as it is.

I hope this review helps. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Awesome work! Keep it up!

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