Hi danielbird

I discovered your item on Writing.com via random Read & Review and am sending the following feedback for your consideration.


Positives

I really liked the structure of this piece. The language is sophisticated, and you presented an engaging, well-paced poem that lends itself well to reading multiple times to fully appreciate it. Nice work!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

I really enjoyed reading this piece. Well done!


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Jeff
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