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 CON TIGO Open in new Window. [E]
A haiku poetry with Spanish Words title meaning With You
by Naomi Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi, Naomi Author Icon,

I found this lovely little haiku poem in your portfolio and thought to review it.

Although I love the content of the poem and its title, which means With You, I am afraid it's not a HAIKU POEM. Haiku has 5-7-5 syllables in the poem. Yours has 3-6-8 in it.
Take a look at syllable counter  Open in new Window.. It will help you with the syllables.

Perhaps you can look at your poem again?

It is a sweet poem, and it deserves the best.

Take care and write on.

WakeUpAndLive Author Icon

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