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Poetry Name Nicole how I meet this girl hopefully it inspires you like my high school days
by DaKidRocks Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi DaKidRocks

I discovered your item on Writing.com via random Read & Review and am sending the following feedback for your consideration.


Positives

I really liked the brief, staccato structure and pace of this poem. It was short, but really impactful. The choice of having all the lines either contain only two or three words was really effective for a poem of this type. Nice work!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I enjoyed reading this. Well done!


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