Hi sabr

I discovered your item on Writing.com via random Read & Review and am sending the following feedback for your consideration.


Positives

I enjoyed reading this item. I thought it was well-written, well-structured, and really entertaining from start to finish. I particularly liked the imagery you used to keep the reader's attention.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a great job with this piece. Well done!


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Jeff
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