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 The Wonder of a mystic. Open in new Window. [E]
The complex relation between I and the physical self.I The higher transcendent self.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Asei

I discovered your item on Writing.com via random Read & Review and am sending the following feedback for your consideration.


Positives

I really enjoyed this bit of philosophical poetry. I think you did a great job posing scenarios that will make the reader really stop and think. Well done!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a good job with this piece. Nice work!


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