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 Strong Hands and Vital Signs Open in new Window. [E]
The key to most sports: strong hands.
by Tim Chiu Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Greetings, Tim!

It's been a while since I've reviewed you. I found this by using the Random Read and Review button.

Hands - we all need them! Especially, as humans, we need those opposable thumbs. I enjoy reading your cheerful rhyming poems about everyday life. Something about your tone always gives them a fanciful air.

Since it's about sports, I understand the reward of drinking alcohol at game's end, but since I know you're a Christian and write poetry about your faith, it might be nice to have a more spiritual perspective at the end to set our sights on higher things.

Other than that, it was a fun and thought-provoking read *Smile*

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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