Hello Sumojo

I found this in the Read & Review section.

My First Impression:

I could feel the fear and then the terror of the girl. I'm not a fan of the dark, and my imagination can cause me to freak out. So this is relatable to me.

My Favorite Part:

I didn't know how this was going to turn out, and for a minute, I was going with a dark murder scene. My heart finally slowed down when I realized they were both trying to catch the last bus. Whew!!

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:

A catchy little story, and I'm glad I found it. Thanks for sharing it. It seems you have a penchant for scary stories. Ha!