An interesting hook for what could be a cool story.
My Favorite Part:
The caring nature of the one who brought this changeling in. They didn't care about the consequences, but chose life for this little one.
My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:
This was written some time ago. Was it for a prompt? Was the scripture reference the prompt for the story? I found this story in the Read & Review section. I'm glad I found it. Thanks for sharing.
Write On!!
You responded to this review 07/22/2025 @ 9:08pm EDT
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