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Review #4826442
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These Are My JOTtings, Part #2 Open in new Window. [E]
We live much of life amid unique choices. Joy is anchored in The One beyond our life.
by Jay O'Toole Author Icon
         Review for entry/chapter: "Gentle Rain Upon the Earth" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello, Jay O'Toole Author IconMail Icon!


INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

*Bulletg* I enjoyed reading your "Gentle Rain Upon the Earth" poem today.

*Bulletg* Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

*Bulleto* Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month! I know Anniversary Reviews is technically closed this month, but I'm carrying on the tradition anyway. *Heart* I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting and encouraging. It is meant to be honest and respectful, and in accordance with Writing.Com guidelines.

*Bulleto* I found your "Gentle Rain Upon the Earth" poem in the news feed today. Even though we had torrential rains earlier this week, it's so hot that we need more rain, so your poem was a nice mental break for me to read tonight.

*Bulleto* I enjoyed your "Gentle Rain Upon the Earth" poem so much. It was full of lovely imagery, and a pleasure to read.

*Bulleto* I thought the rhyming worked well with the message of your "Gentle Rain Upon the Earth" poem.

*Bulleto* My favorite part was how it glorified the Lord God.

*Bulleto* I know, when I see your poems linked anywhere, that I will enjoy them. Most of them involve the Lord in some good way, and even the few that don't (though I don't remember even one specifically, so maybe there aren't any that don't?) are still beautiful. And anything appreciating creation glorifies our Creator.

*Bulleto* I thought you did a great job with the flow of your poem.

*Bulleto* Your specific nature images were lovely to picture in my mind.

*Bulleto* I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your "A Note of Thanks" poem.

*Bulleto* My very favorite part of your "Testimonies" blog post is that your love for the Lord and His care for His creation, including us humans, shined throughout it.


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I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's wonderful as it is. Well done! *Clap*



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CONCLUSION:

*Bulletv* I enjoyed reading your "Gentle Rain Upon the Earth" poem, and empathized with your sentiments that you expressed in it.

*Bulletv* Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, experiences, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

*Bulletv* Once again, happy anniversary month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance, and may the Lord bless you and all that you do, during your anniversary month, and always!

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