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 Dead girls don't forget Open in new Window. [GC]
A brutal assault shatters a young woman’s world, but her attackers walk free
by E. Mortaine Author Icon
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Rated: GC | (4.0)
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Hi E. Mortaine

I discovered your item on Writing.com via random Read & Review and am sending the following feedback for your consideration.


Positives

I thought you did a great job capturing the horror and the trauma of this type of encounter. It was a harrowing read, but a well-written one.


Suggestions

I would have like a little more of a coda to the story as it felt like a rather abrupt end, but that's a relatively minor quibble with an otherwise solid story.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a good job with this. Well done!


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