Hello Jay O'Toole

My First Impression:

I found this poem in the read and review section.

My Favorite Part:

I love how you've made a wonderful poem about the great memories growing up. I even got a chuckle about giving the parents "gray hairs". I think all kids do that to their parents. Ha!

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:

The cadence to your poem was bouncy and a pleasure to read. But then again, it is no surprise with your flair of poetry. Thanks for sharing your heart, and trust in the promise of a grand reuniting one day.