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Only If You Love Me Open in new Window. [E]
A chance meeting. A deep connection. But can love survive when hearts carry old scars?
by David Author Icon
Review by ♫~ Kenword~♫ Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings David Author IconMail Icon,  Welcome to Writing.com! I was pleased to read  "Only If You Love Me" Open in new Window. from your portfolio and it is my pleasure to give your writing a review.

August, 7 2025

*Coffeer*  FIRST IMPRESSION
 
This was yummm in every way. Lyrical. True. Passionate without haste. The interlacing of your poetic gift is beautifully done. And Eline...Oh my. I hope you married the girl.  

*Coffeer*  THEME
 
"Only If You Love Me" Open in new Window. revisits the beauty and mystery of how romantic love is born. A look. A smile. A drawing into a dance where love meets love and never stops even when two hearts misstep for a moment. Love prevails. Always.

*Coffeer*  STRUCTURE
 
The story is written in a third person narrative form. The style is poetic with vivid pictures of surroundings, feelings and the most enchanting person on earth. Eline.
 
*Coffeer**Coffeer*  MY FAVORITE MOMENT
 
This was my favorite moment:

“She looked up. And smiled.
It wasn't a smile for anyone else. Not flashy, not designed to charm. It was a small, sincere curve of her lips that felt like it was meant just for him.”

The sweetest smile on earth disarms the man. Gives him inspirations about a life that no one else has ever lived. Yes. There have been a few Eline's in my life, but I could never quite capture what the gravitational pull was. You have poetically expressed it beautifully. I'll step back into the dream.
 
*Coffeer*  SUGGESTIONS
 
There is a natural grip you have developed for capturing your audience and holding us through the whole story. It was a blissful read for me. Your expressions are more gentle than what most romance writers can achieve. Please do continue.


*Coffeer**Coffeer*  IN SUMMARY*Coffeer**Coffeer*
 
"Only If You Love Me" Open in new Window. is a story of two people with a chance at life together if their own misgivings about the past will dissipate with the next rainfall. The connection is beautifully painted with words that are almost lyrical. Thank you! *Smile*
 
I hope my thoughts and impressions have been a help. Let me know if you have any questions about my review.
 
Kind Regards,

*Music2*~Kenword~*Music2* *Mugr**MugR*
 

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