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Childhood summer
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi shaeve

I discovered your item on Writing.com via random Read & Review and am sending the following feedback for your consideration.


Positives

I thought you did a good job of capturing the essence of a summer childhood experience. The detail was excellent, and the structure moved things along nicely. Well done!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a good job with this piece. Nice work!


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Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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