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 The Car Open in new Window. [18+]
This is a short writing exercise I was given around jealousy.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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I enjoyed reading this entry. I thought your characterization of Marc was really well done throughout the piece, and you built to a satisfying conclusion. I thought your detail and description was great, and a really good take on the theme of jealousy. Nice work!

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