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Hi Jim

I discovered your item on Writing.com via random Read & Review and am sending the following feedback for your consideration.


Positives

I'm not familiar with experimental vertical line poetry, but I like what you did here. The language was evocative and clear, and the pacing flowed well. Nice work!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I enjoyed reading this piece. Well done!


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