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 Alexander Wright (chapter 2) Open in new Window. [13+]
Rei Nakata has successfully enrolled in her target's school. What will happen?
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Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hi Miya

I discovered your item on Writing.com via random Read & Review and am sending the following feedback for your consideration.


Positives

I like the way that this story was primarily conveyed through dialogue. It was engaging and the exposition was interesting. It definitely made me want to read more in this setting!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a good job with this piece. Well done!


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Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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