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![]() | In The Beginning Was The Word ![]() It is an ode to the power of words! Please do read and drop a line or two. Thanks! ![]() |
The Summoning was easy reading provided melodic vibe to read further more when reading a new paragraph into "The Power" Even pain wears ribbons, this line made me as a reader think this is what you as the writer feel overall about writing in my opinion. As a reader I liked it. This here below was just beautiful. Do not freeze at the white page bare, It waits for your breath to anchor there. Spool and unspool, rearrange— Till fire, till silk, till blossoms change. Make them oasis, make them wings, A mirror that drinks, a silence that sings I also liked this line here: So let words serve you— drape them, dance them, I love rhythm and how you choice minimal and rhymes. Well done and thank you so much for sharing your poem. "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" ![]()
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