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Weekly Poetry Challenge Five and Six Open in new Window. [13+]
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Greetings, sir!

I'm back for another one today, having tapped on the next entry in your book. Congrats on completing PPC5, and best of luck working with the new round. I love seeing how everyone takes the prompts and works them into something unique to their own life experiences, either autobiographical or more of an artistic license.

I see you have a few "mixed-up" words in the description of your dream emotions... Is it "bewitched" and "hypnotized?" Or did you purposefully mix up the words to create that mysterious, dreamlike state of mind where nothing is quite as it seems? If so, it's cleverly done, like an Alice in Wonderland down the rabbit hole kind of thing. I'm always amazed at the providence of you and your wife meeting and getting married. It must be such a joy to know you were destined to be together.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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