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Finding The Truth on a Painted Lake Open in new Window. [E]
A tale that explains a mystery.
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Review by Kenzie Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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That's an interesting tale.

My only suggestion would be to try not to end sentences with prepositions. Yes, grammar rules are not as strict as they once were. Still..

This: This particular wall is the one place in my apartment that I can never seem to find anything decorative for.

In my opinion would be better as:

This particular wall is the one place in my apartment for which I can never seem to find anything decorative.

Thanks for sharing.

Blessings,

Kenzie
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