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Live From the Capitol Open in new Window. [E]
Boiled down, the press release was this...
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Gratefully IE here with a review of "Live From the Capitol" Open in new Window.

First impression:

I wish all press releases would be this succinct…


Favorite bit:

“nothing that really matters
very much at all.”

Here are my comments, observations and suggestions. Take what you need and disregard the rest. They're all just my opinion:

*Writing*Composition/Flow/Line Length: This flowed well. While short, the message encompasses so much.

*Writing*Punctuation/Spelling: Nothing noted.

In summation:

I admire the brevity. There’s too much talking in politics and about politics.

Thank you for the opportunity to read and review your work.

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