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| (4.5)| This is a review brought to you by: . "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" ,  "WDC Dragon Vale " , and  "Positive Hearts Reviews Group"   WELCOME TO WDC! Thank you for sharing your poem. I love the alliterations in your poem. That is what stood out for me the most. It mustn't be easy writing a poem with words that begin with 'B'. The poem is about the devastation of war which is so relatable with what is going on in war-torn countries like Gaza. I would think: "Ballista bombs, broke boys’ belief" does not need a comma in between. All in all, good job. The brutality of war, the emotions, the cruelty were all conveyed in your poem in just one stanza. The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise. Thank you for sharing this with us and Write On!  Fairy ☮   My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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