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 Light Spectrum Open in new Window. [E]
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by Kaise Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Kaise Author Icon

I discovered your item on Writing.com via random Read & Review and am sending the following feedback for your consideration.


Positives

I liked the brevity and the simplicity of this poem. I also like the scientific theme/genre of the piece, as there aren't many poems out there that incorporate these elements. Nice work!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I think you did a good job with this piece. Well done!


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Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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