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 Great grandmother Open in new Window. [E]
I love my great grandma, i wrote this for her specifically.
by Charlie V. C. Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Charlie V. C. Author Icon

I discovered your item on Writing.com via random Read & Review and am sending the following feedback for your consideration.


Positives

I really liked the sentiment and the message of this piece. I think a lot of people discount the elderly because they may not be as quick or spry as they were in their earlier years, but that doesn't mean they don't have an incredible amount of value to add to the world.

I thought you did a great job of honoring your great-grandmother with this piece. Well done!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, this was a great read. Nice work!


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Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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