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Foresight Open in new Window. [13+]
Norman weathers the storm of the past.
by Bilal Latif Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Wow, what a chilling story, in a good way. It sets us off on a chase through time so confusing, I had to read it a couple times to get my head around what was happening and the foreshadowing details about boots and the fire where Del's child was lost and whatnot. My first time around, I thought Del succeeded in kidnapping Leira (just realized that's Ariel backwards - cool detail!) and was somehow hiding her for ten years. But he and Norman were both running loose through the timeline, each with a conflicting agenda that wrapped in circles, affecting the experiences of all involved, with treachery, pain and reunion. This must've been fun to write! It's definitely fun to read.

I would suggest using Size 4 Verdana font to ensure a clear and engaging reading experience for everyone. You should also definitely consider submitting this to "Twisted Tales Contest" Open in new Window.. I believe it would be greatly appreciated, and I welcome the competition most months *Wink* While you're at it, you can underline the title at the top of your item body, or maybe remove it since titles are pretty clearly posted anyway *Smile*

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