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 Each year Open in new Window. [E]
Nostalgia-reminiscing on family cookouts
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Jim Author Icon

I discovered your item on Writing.com via random Read & Review and am sending the following feedback for your consideration.


Positives

I thought you did a great job with the imagery in this piece. Each stanza presented a vibrant image that was well-described and captured the essence of the setting. Nice work!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I really enjoyed this piece. Well done!


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Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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