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Given: Oct 27, 2025 at 10:34pm
Length: 853 Characters |
850 w/o WritingML
Thanks, Rhychus, for a fun trip through a Most Excellent poem!
Looks like this was intended to be a song. Three verses of 8 lines each with a 5 line chorus in between the verses. Every chorus shares the same words.
Charity, advertising, and fashion shows have a common thread, depending on the personality behind them. They can all be great successes or serious flops because they are consistently niche markets.
The format of the verses are consistent as best I can tell. Rhythmically, each verse of 8 lines has the first seven lines using tetrameter, and #8 is trimeter. Each line is some combination of iambic and anapestic meter.
The five-line choruses range rhythmically from dimeter to trimeter and tetrameter.
The rhyme schemes are as follows: Verses are a-a-x-b-c-c-x-b; Choruses are a-b-a-c-c
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