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 Poignant Open in new Window. [E]
24 syllables poem using the word Poignant
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings, Sue!

I discovered this with the random Read and Review button.

Oh my, this is... Poignant. In 24 syllables, you've painted a picture of heartbreak, loss and mourning for what we're not even sure of. It's like a tiny snapshot of a movie scene. Perfectly crafted and not a single word wasted. What can I say?

Perhaps an image would be good, on the cover. A letter or a stamp, or a heart, perhaps. And also two more suitable genres for the item so people can find it when browsing. I would suggest Drama, Melodrama, or Relationship.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *WingL**Heartv**WingR*


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