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 The Underground  Open in new Window. [18+]
Dancing to the beat
by Winchester Jones Author Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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This came up in "Read & Review", so here I am! This story shows a fun and wild night at an alien dance club. The details about the different species, the music, and the dancing make the scene easy to picture. The narrator is having a great time, while his friend Gordo is grumpy and worried, which creates a good contrast. The humor works well, especially when the narrator misunderstands the aliens’ gestures. Overall, it is a lively and imaginative scene with a playful voice and lots of creative world-building. Great job! Thank you for sharing.
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