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The Lighthouse Keeper's Secrets Open in new Window. [13+]
It's the 1930's, and Damian meets Esther for the first time.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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I give it a 4.2. Well written with a sense of time and place, but it felt a bit out of time. 1920s? I didn't like how it flowed... or didn't flow. “I don’t like to bring attention to myself.” A good retort. I liked the dialogue but not fond of the asides. ... A romance? Felt... a bit rushed; better for a longer story. Love (or lust) at first glance is real though. I did like how the story didn't end... "Not yet" is most appropo.

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